tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5279124391550516733.post642424121589813950..comments2023-10-16T02:30:23.876-07:00Comments on Foolish Sympathy for the Devil(s): And Trouble BeginsRubblehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14224407611542686928noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5279124391550516733.post-10545011000265159462009-06-26T04:57:01.486-07:002009-06-26T04:57:01.486-07:00pleasepleasepleaseplease write more!pleasepleasepleaseplease write more!Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01100214534271300219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5279124391550516733.post-69043160762841275292009-03-29T13:53:00.000-07:002009-03-29T13:53:00.000-07:00“For the night, that was all he played for them, b...“For the night, that was all he played for them, but from then on he played a couple of songs every night.” – clunky, doesn’t read well.<BR/>“He <B>would always chose</B> a song from his memory’s repertoire and then fill out the rest of his portion of the night with songs that they were more familiar with” – either “always chose” or “would always choose”<BR/>“Brant had seen this farmer several times and had spoke” – spoken. <BR/>“Well, if you’re that certain, go talk to Ol’ Branwyn. He’ll gather the militia and investing<B>ate.” The</B> Innkeeper said barely paying Parcive any mind. - investigate,” the innkeeper said…<BR/>Neither inn nor innkeeper are proper nouns, don’t capitalize them.<BR/>Goblins, my favored enemy ( to be read as one might read “Electro-plate, my arch nemesis”)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17823614105757455275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5279124391550516733.post-70772162428639373672009-03-26T10:17:00.000-07:002009-03-26T10:17:00.000-07:00EAT FIRE YOU DAMN DIRTY GOBLINS! FALL TO YOUR KNEE...EAT FIRE YOU DAMN DIRTY GOBLINS! FALL TO YOUR KNEES AND WORSHIP ME AS AN INCARNATION OF ELEMENTAL DEATH THAT MY WRATH MIGHT BE TEMPERED AND YE BE ALLOWED TO LIVE AS MY DISCIPLES AND MISSIONARIES!<BR/><BR/>Though, honestly, it's unlikely to temper the wrath. I mean, seriously. Come to me my little flaming bags of XP!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18106352374733393145noreply@blogger.com